What are you saying?

Sometimes, our enthusiasm to share information results in a confusing text:  😱

➤  A typical non-descript modern building from the outside the Hilton Garden Inn is very convenient for Temple Meads station (just a five minute stroll) and a little further from the harbour's lively facilities and the Town Centre, all in all around fifteen minutes walk from Central Boulevard.

Not only confusing, the poor reader has to edit and interpret what is written: considerate writers make writing readable! 😇

■ keep different subjects separate
■ be careful with vague or imprecise language
■ avoid using unfamiliar or generalist names, words or expressions
■ always check your spelling

What would you change in the above example? How would you improve it? 🤔