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Repetition is not necessarily bad but it doesn’t mean it’s good, as it can be used for emphasis. However, repetition can show a sentence’s poor construction, a lack of variety and interest for the reader.

In addition, as it is written in a professional capacity, the vocabulary is too informal with words poorly chosen for this type of writing.

Restructure this sentence:
We will conduct a survey into tree use, how they benefit city living and what species is best suited at the required location.

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