Comment
Using incorrect conjunctions will not only confuse your writers but send the wrong message. If readers need to interpret what is written, it tells them the writer does not care. In addition, the final clause is vague and should be clarified.

To improve this text, other than needs to be replaced by an appropriate subordinator, with and replaced by furthermore:
Bicycles are one of the most efficient forms of transport, as well as buses, trams, rapid transport systems and train, furthermore, their contributions to city finances should not be underestimated.
By replacing economics, the sentence can now lead into an explanation in the following sentence.

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