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Not only is this sentence vague, it repeats tree unnecessarily. To give the sentence more impact, eliminate vague words and use a compound/ complex sentence structure:
We will conduct a survey into tree use and how they enhance city living, as well as which is best suited to our man-made  environment.
In addition, create a more dynamic text by using verbs or adjectives rather than nouns; changing life into living, and suitable into suited.

The text is now clear, powerful and readable.

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